zero-to-gpt

Writing Style Guide

Rules for anyone writing lessons, stories, timeline entries, or Bug Hunt challenges.

Describing historical work: use their words

When we describe what a researcher did, we use the words they used, quoted and cited.

Key terms, in their words (each one checked against the original paper):

They said Who, where Today we say
“neurons” with “all-or-none” activity, treated “by means of propositional logic” McCulloch & Pitts 1943 (DOI) threshold logic units
“perceptron”: “a probabilistic model for information storage and organization in the brain” Rosenblatt 1958 (DOI) single-layer linear classifier
“Two machine-learning procedures have been investigated…” Samuel 1959 (DOI) machine learning (one of the term’s earliest uses)
“(soft-)search”, “align”, “alignment model”; “attention” appears only twice Bahdanau, Cho & Bengio 2014 (arXiv) attention
“the 287 essentially distinct positions” Michie 1963 (DOI) 304 boxes in most modern MENACE rebuilds
“Shortcuts are decision rules that perform well on standard benchmarks but fail to transfer…” Geirhos et al. 2020 (DOI) shortcut learning

Why: paraphrasing is how history gets bent. A real result gets attached to the wrong machine, the wrong decade, or a bigger claim than the authors made. Quoting the source keeps us honest. It also shows students how to check claims, which is the point of the Bug Hunt.

Sensitive topics

Studies that classify people (by sex, race, faces, and so on) are history we can discuss, quoting the authors’ own terms. They are never hands-on student activities. We treat them as conversations about bias and fairness.

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